This must have taken all of an hour

Made me lol.

And that's all it was meant to do. Thanks guy, you made my day.

Way better than the frontpage one.

But still not very good.

Intro was nice but oh man that bass really clashes hard after. The riff works well with it, but it just sounds out of place with everything else. I like the lazer sounds and background in the middle, but the lack of melody with them makes them seem lonely. Ah, now that synth plays well with the bass at the end there. In fact this seems like a huge jumble of just messing around, but in a really good experimental way. Kind of like an early version of Aphex Twin. It feels like Aphex Twin when they were kids. Having fun and just trying anything for the hell of it. +1 did not download.

My friend, this is trance. Not dance, but pretty darn good trance. I like how it plays more like a classical piece but has that dark mystery of electronica. I feel some of the synths in the middle were kind of thrown in haphazardly, and the melody could have had a transition into a new dynamic to show a change of mood or growth. The transitions you used did, however, move the piece along nicely anyway. Just seems like a final form was missing. The countermelody at the end almost did it for me, but fell just a little short. Perhaps it was too short lived. Anyway, downloaded +1 you're 2 for 2.

I definitely think the melodic synth could use some tweaking. Also you had a great idea, what you needed to do was add some more to the original song. Another verse, bar, hell even a transition into the same/different thing. Downloaded +1. First song of yours I've heard, starting to listen to others now.